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Monday, 24 February 2014

#TantalizingTuesdays - Hands of Fate


Every Tuesday a bunch of talented writers choose a picture that inspires them to write a 200 word teaser. Check them out here.


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Hands of Fate


The edge of the dresser dug into Izzy's thighs with every thrust. She didn't care. Reuben was driving her straight to heaven with each powerful stroke of his cock. 

One night stands weren't usually her style, but from the moment he'd walked into her life they'd had an unmistakable connection. His line about knowing her all her life might've sounded corny, but now she knew it was the truth. She felt complete with him inside her.

His breath was hot in her ear, his fingers rough on her skin, as they rode the crest of ecstasy together.

"Are you sure this is okay?" she asked through panting breath. It was a bit late now to worry about the implications of what they were doing, yet she wanted his assurance he wouldn't get into trouble.

"You worry too much." Reuben kissed her on the lips, his soft touch both reassuring and arousing.

"Isn't that why you're here?" He'd told her from the beginning he'd come to help her find peace of mind.

"As your Guardian Angel I'm appointing myself charge of your mental AND physical welfare." He resumed his duties without further delay.

Who was she to argue with divine intervention?

7 comments:

  1. Oh, this is superb. Loved that twist :-)

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  2. "Divine" is the right word! I loved this tease, Jorja. It was hot and sensual and playful all at once. Loved it!

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  3. Jorja, there's something about it that intrigues me. Love what what you put on there. Great post.

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  4. Jorja, I just didn't anticipate the twist from nowhere.......or should I say the Heavens? Simply delightful. It has something for the discerning palate: sex, heat, reflection, introspection, religion with the only thing remaining as wine. But, seems they won't be leaving anything out, not yet. Delightful. xo

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  5. LOVED that twist on the guardian angel. Terrific longer story potential.

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  6. Ha! Naughty, playful and huge fun. Lovely final line. Plus I love a story which gets straight to the wicked point.

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