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This week I thought I'd share a taster from my current wip, provisionally titled Shifter Pride. It's my first foray into menage...maybe...
Ed was so
protective of Ange it bordered on possessiveness but he wouldn't see her hurt
for the world. With Reuben's advice to back off, and the PDA from Ange and Cole
reverting back to hand holding, the red mist drifted away.
He relaxed his hands until he
had ten fingers again instead of two fists capable of mass destruction. "I
could still take him if it came to it."
"Sure." Reuben's knowing nod contradicted his words.
Ed sniffed the air trying to distinguish the scent among the others.
"Cat?"
"Panther." The grin spread into a beaming smile showcasing
even white teeth and a deep set dimple.
This would be so much easier to make a move if they were two guys in
a bar instead of part of this debacle. Although, one night stands didn't work
so well when you were both locked up in the same hotel for the weekend. The
best he could hope for was a like-minded soul who didn't want anymore
complication than he did.
"I could still take him," Ed mumbled.
Reuben got the impression he was no longer talking about Cole
judging by the husky rasp of his voice. Heat burned the palm of his hand still
resting on Ed's chest. The defined lines of the pecs beneath his fingertips
made him itch to see more. Even if Ed should have a large 'Danger' sign slapped
across his forehead.
He was exactly what Reuben didn't need – a hothead who thought with
his fists. So why was he trembling with anticipation, not fear?
They locked eyes, and for Reuben, all background noise faded away.
All he could hear was the thump of his own heart. Ed's chest rose and fell a
little faster under his touch. The tightening in Reuben's balls was there even
before Ed took his hand and pulled him toward the far side of the room.
Reuben swallowed hard. He knew what was coming, and God help him, he
couldn't resist. He was just asking for trouble and it had definitely found him
in the form of a sexy red fox.



Terrific build up here!
ReplyDeleteOne dam hot scene! I love the tension about the attraction to a someone acting like a redneck. Well done.
ReplyDeleteReuben had a nice way to distract Ed from Ange. I wonder how that will play.
ReplyDeleteGreat scene and very hot ending!
ReplyDeleteGreat ramp up on the tension.
ReplyDeleteLike a locomotive, building up steam and getting ready to break loose. Wonderful tension and creative imagery... xo
ReplyDeleteGreat taster, excellent build up
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