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"What exactly are we looking for?" Cole led the way down
to the basement, using the flashlight to guide their path.
Ed could adopt his animal side to better see in the dark, he was
sure Cole could too, but the yellow glow saved them the effort of shifting.
"The main electric supply, the distribution board, the isolator
switch – anywhere there could be a fault. I don't smell anything burning so
it's probably just a blown fuse or something." Ed could barely make out
the panel beyond Cole's massive frame. When he came to a standstill in the
corner of the room, Ed almost collided with him.
"Well, if there'd been a fire the sprinklers would've come on."
Cole swung the torch around and Ed had to shield his eyes.
"Can you quit trying to blind me?"
"Sorry." Cole tilted the flashlight up so it underlit his
handsome, smiling face.
"I just need to get at the box behind your shoulder."
There wasn't room to swap places, so Ed had to squeeze past the muscle
mountain. For one heart stopping moment, the only sound was the heart of the
hotel whirring around them.
Thigh brushed against thigh. Hot breath mingled with hot breath as
they came face to face.
So this was the animal
magnetism that everyone found so irresistible? Ed
was beginning to get it as he was pulled into that vortex of insta-lust, keen
to find out what all the fuss was about.
It was a simultaneous decision to act on the attraction as they
launched at each other. There was no tenderness or finesse as their mouths
clashed together. This was a blatant display of naked passion.
Cole dropped the flashlight on the floor and clamped his hand around
the back of Ed's neck, drawing him deeper into the savage kiss. They wrapped
their tongues around each other in exploration, and Ed soon
developed a taste for the exotic hunk of masculinity fighting him for dominance. He
was hard in seconds, Cole too, as steel pressed against steel in the dark.



WoW, Jorja! That was hot, sizzling in fact, and very erotic. Beautifully written. xo
ReplyDeleteThey all want him, he is going to be so busy!
ReplyDeleteI really like the progression here.
alright! love the kiss scene at the end. very hot
ReplyDeleteA quick and heady turn this one took.
ReplyDeleteVery erotic Jorja. Now this weekend is going to be very interesting.
ReplyDeleteI love thjis intyense scene, especially the fight for domination. I wonder who won? Great scene.
ReplyDeleteExciting excerpt, especially this, "This was a blatant display of naked passion." Yum!
ReplyDeleteTerrific teaser- you upped the tension so well and made it spread out for the reader- drawing them deeper and deeper into the scene. well done.
ReplyDeleteWonderful storyline. You really drew me in. Great taster. The animal attraction was entirely apparent and so erotic
ReplyDeleteMmm... That word described the scenario best... Insta-lust.
ReplyDeleteAwesome taster Jorja.