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Tuesday, 9 September 2014

Closing Time - #TantalizingTuesdays



Every Tuesday a bunch of talented writers choose a picture that inspires them to write a 200 word teaser. Check them out here.





Closing Time
Kyle waved off the last of the customers before locking the restaurant doors for the night. "I thought they would never leave."


"I think those girls were enjoying your company a little too much." Linzi stopped counting the evening's takings long enough to scold him.

"What can I say, I'm in demand." He grinned, knowing exactly how to push her buttons.

"Hmm. Just remember you're here to work, not play." As the cash register slammed shut, Kyle winced, imagining his balls trapped in there if he ever crossed that line.

"My, my, you sound…jealous." There was no need, it was a well-known fact he only had eyes for one woman at work.

"Ignore me. I'm just tired and cranky." And obviously in some pain from being on her feet all night, given the way she was rubbing her lower back.

"In that case, you need to de-stress." With totally selfless intent, he took her by the hand and led her over to the bar.

"Kyle, I really don't feel like drinking," she protested as he pushed her toward the counter.

He slid his hand under her dress and whipped her panties down her legs. "Who said anything about a drink?"




9 comments:

  1. OMG, I liked that yummy twist in the end. Good one!

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  2. Oho, I do like his relaxation techniques, lol.

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  3. Oh Jorja, Jorja, jorja... Superb ending. you put a smile right on me face.

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  4. Taking charge. I wonder if she'll appreciate that.

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  5. Who's giving the orders and being the pushy one now? I love this photo and you so sis it justice. A kind of Cary Grant erotica, the way any woman would want to be taken, not stirred, in a bar. Loved it. WOnderful story in a mere 200 words. xo

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  6. oh nice.... and let the fun begin :)

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  7. Nice twist at the end. I chuckled with his intent fooling her until then.

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  8. Hot tease and what a wonderful way to de-stress and forget any pain

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