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In A Different Light
The sound of splashing water woke Penny from her poolside slumber. Not that she was complaining once she saw the source of her wake up call. Tiago glided effortlessly through the water, the ripple of his muscles as fluid as the small waves he created with every stroke. He made his way over to the side of the pool, looking deliciously cool whilst she was baking in the summer sun. "Care to join me?"
The sound of splashing water woke Penny from her poolside slumber. Not that she was complaining once she saw the source of her wake up call. Tiago glided effortlessly through the water, the ripple of his muscles as fluid as the small waves he created with every stroke. He made his way over to the side of the pool, looking deliciously cool whilst she was baking in the summer sun. "Care to join me?"
"I'm fine here." Swimming meant she would
have to shed her clothes and reveal a less than toned stomach. It was fine
under the covers, but not here in broad daylight where every defect could be
seen in glorious technicolour.
Water sluiced down Tiago's beautiful naked form as he
hoisted himself out over the edge of the pool. "Come with me." The
words, so innocent in other circumstances, held so much more meaning now his
burgeoning erection was in view.
A bolt of excitement shot through Penny, bypassing her
fears about her body being ten years younger than his. She didn't complain as
he untied her sarong . Suddenly she couldn't wait to jump in the pool. As soon
as she'd worked up a sweat first…
Very sweet. I understand her hesitation.
ReplyDeleteThat's was some super descriptions. Made a little movie in my head. Great tease x
ReplyDeleteI have never read the word "sluiced" in an erotic piece but it was perfect for this story! It is a 'must remember' for me. Your word pictures were vivid and real. The emotion you wrought pulled the same emotions from me. Wonderful flash. xo
ReplyDeleteSuch a fun teaser. Excellent descriptions. So vivid. I was pulled right into this story and wanted to read more about these two.
ReplyDeleteWhat a pic! And a great tease to go with it. This was fun :-)
ReplyDeletegreat tease nice build up to a ( I suspect) a very hot scene
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