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Friday, 10 January 2014

Flasher Fiction Friday - Bound #FFF

This is my first attempt at Flash Fiction, so fingers crossed...



"Hard at it?" Jess made her way down into their cellar-cum-dungeon.
Elijah was hunched on the floor, shirtless, replacing the shackles with shiny new chains.
"I need something to vent my frustration on at this time of the month." He threw her a sexy grin.
"We'll make up for it next week, Babe." She was every bit as horny as he was, watching his muscles bunch as he worked.

"Hold that thought. It's time for you to go," he said taking the strain of the steel around his wrists. 
His eyes had already changed to those of his wolf.

Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Don't forget to check out the rest of those taking part. Flasher Fiction Friday

14 comments:

  1. this so sexy.And I never expected that brilliant last line.

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  2. Love that last line> Well done for a great first flash!
    Welcome x

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  3. Brilliant, especially your ending with the eyes of the wolf.

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  4. *shivers* Fab flash, Jorja. So glad you joined us :-)

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  5. I like how you flipped it with the last line. Nice one.

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  6. I wasn't expecting that at all, Jorja. That was quite a curve ball at the end. Great 100 words. It is going to be great fun having you in the group!! I loved this <3 xo

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  7. Wonderful and great twist at the end!

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  8. Fascinating! Love when the last line can make you see the writing in a whole new light. Definitely a sexy flash. :D

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  9. Awesome twist there at the end- a shifter!
    ~Decadent

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  10. shifters!! oh yeah. great first flash since I'm a shifter girl myself :)

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  11. Oh, excellente!! Love the were twist at the end :-) This is just my second flash. Welcome!!

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  12. Love this flasher. Great twist at the end that brought the whole thing together. Would love to know more

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  13. Love the detail and playfulness between these two. I want to know more! :) Great way to keep me hooked. :) Awesome flash.

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  14. Great flash love the dark edge at the end

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