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Thursday, 30 January 2014

#FlashFictionFriday - Secret Lovers

Every week, a fabulous group of writers take inspiration from a selected pic and write 100 words to go with it. Check them out  #FlashFictionFriday

Secret Lovers



"What are you doing?" Ed was only half awake as Francesca climbed on top of him.

"I wanted to see if you were up yet." She peeked down in time to see him rise with the morning sun.

"How did you get past security in the living room?" It was ridiculous they still had to sneak about like teenagers.

"The TV is at full volume. They can't hear us." She kissed him long and hard, and he didn't take much persuading to get with the programme.


"Mum? What's for breakfast?" The small face at the door killed the moment dead.

7 comments:

  1. Oh, God!! Who hasn't that happened to? So cute. At first I thought that they were YAs and the aging parents fell asleep in front of the TV. Your ending is even better, just charming <3 xo

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  2. Oh I loved this. It made me chuckle. Little ones can certainly kill a moment

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  3. Awh! We haven't had that pleasure yet lol! Lovely flash Jorja x

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  4. Oh, I love it! any parent can relate I'm sure :-)

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  5. that hit home i have 5 kids LOL this was great :)

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  6. LOL! Perfect timing. Not. lolol Awesome fun, playful flash. I wonder how they will get out of this and explain themselves. lol

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