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This week, I've stopped by the cosmetics counter in my wip. This is the second book in my series, The Department Store.
With
grim determination, he pulled her back the way she came, not saying a word.
"Jonah?
What's going on? I need to go home." The tone of her voice varied from
loud, outright panic, to quiet resignation. It only succeeded in driving him on
in his quest.
When
they reached the pub again he dodged down the alleyway at the side. They didn't
need an audience. He pushed Maggie up against the wall, careful not to hurt
her, but, with enough force to stop her running again. He caged her between his
body and the brick building. As she worried her bottom lip with her teeth,
Jonah leaned down to catch it and draw it back out. She was soft and pliant,
and her gentle scent intoxicated him further.
With
a point to prove, he kissed her hard, plunging his tongue in to her mouth to
taste her sweetness and claim it for himself. Such an audacious move would've
deserved a slap or a knee to the balls. Either would've been worth it. Instead,
she went limp beneath him, submitting immediately.
Whoah!
He
levered her off and stepped back. "That is how you make me feel. How you
should be kissed."
Christ,
the way she responded to it made it a double sin that someone didn't do that to
her frequently.

kiss me like that yes!!!! well done great taste.... will be looking to read more... hugs T
ReplyDeleteOoh love it. Gotta get me some of those kisses lol. Great taster
ReplyDeleteLoved it! Now I need the man who is more than fantasy! LOL! Excellent!
ReplyDeleteFans self- love the wall...
ReplyDeleteHOT. best kiss ever :) just enough verbal cues and physical actions to draw me in
ReplyDeleteOh, very hot! What a kiss... Might we have more? :)
ReplyDeleteThe lead ito the kiss was fabulous and well-paced (fast). I'd like to read what happens next. Will she try to run away again and why she did before.
ReplyDeleteI don't know what is going to happen, but I know what just happened and it was wonderfully written. Good thing I was sitting down or my knees would have buckled, too. Great taster <3 xo
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